As the moon started to Rise, His mother called him inside immediately. He didn’t listen and he started to run but then he fell in a Portal because he wasn't looking where he was going. The Portal was to the north pole and Santa was angry at him.
If only he listened to his mother , if only he was looking were he was going , if only he had not been so dumb and run away he would not be in this mess. Do you think that He will ever get out of the North Pole?
Blue: Adverbial Phrase
Purple: Repetition
Pink: Rhetorical Question
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