Philippines- I chose the philippines because some of my family live their.
Pool- I chose the pool because I love swimming.
A House On A Rainbow- I chose a house on a rainbow because i like my house and rainbows so perfect match.
Pringle land- I chose Pringle land because I like Pringles.
Once upon a time there was a girl named Natalia, she wanted to go to the philippines but she didn't believe that she could go to the philippines. That night her mother and father said "she can't go to the philippines," she had a dream that she was in the philippines and when she woke up there was a box. A magical one and it had a letter on it she read it and it said "This is a magical box that can teleport you anywhere!!" she was shocked but she Jumped inside and she thought of where she wanted to go and POOF she was gone but what she didn't know is that when she disappears the time stops in the real world and she was gone for a whole week. when she got there she saw her family and pets and she played with them.
After the stay she went over the hill and in the castle. she saw the Queen and she bowed, the Queen was like "oh Dear please dont bow I don't like it!!!" "Ok I Won't I promise" "So Do you need anything?'' "No I don't thank you ._." "Come with me" ''Ok.(_).'' ''oh and call me Nikita'' ''Got it!'' we walked to the Pool and we got our swimsuits on then they relaxed. Natalia sees a fountain and swam up the fountain, when she was on top of the fountain she saw a House on a rainbow she says to the Queen '' NIKITA COME UP HERE'' OK.... WoW'' IKR!! so pretty I wish that we could live here ''y- ''Mommy!!!??? Where are you!!???'' I'M UP HERE!!!'' ''Mommy?!!! ''No you can't swim ''I don't care im always with you ''No i'm coming down ''ok mommy'' '' Bye wait I didn't get your name'' oh sorry my name is Natalia" '' Well Bye Natalia'' Bye" I'm coming kat!'' "whats inside here oh wait it's a stable, hi unicorn!!" Natalia walks around back and sees Pringle land "PRINGLES YUMMY One pringle two pringles 50 Pringles oh wow but my adventure is over bye!!''
Once upon a time there was a girl named Natalia, she wanted to go to the philippines but she didn't believe that she could go to the philippines. That night her mother and father said "she can't go to the philippines," she had a dream that she was in the philippines and when she woke up there was a box. A magical one and it had a letter on it she read it and it said "This is a magical box that can teleport you anywhere!!" she was shocked but she Jumped inside and she thought of where she wanted to go and POOF she was gone but what she didn't know is that when she disappears the time stops in the real world and she was gone for a whole week. when she got there she saw her family and pets and she played with them.
After the stay she went over the hill and in the castle. she saw the Queen and she bowed, the Queen was like "oh Dear please dont bow I don't like it!!!" "Ok I Won't I promise" "So Do you need anything?'' "No I don't thank you ._." "Come with me" ''Ok.(_).'' ''oh and call me Nikita'' ''Got it!'' we walked to the Pool and we got our swimsuits on then they relaxed. Natalia sees a fountain and swam up the fountain, when she was on top of the fountain she saw a House on a rainbow she says to the Queen '' NIKITA COME UP HERE'' OK.... WoW'' IKR!! so pretty I wish that we could live here ''y- ''Mommy!!!??? Where are you!!???'' I'M UP HERE!!!'' ''Mommy?!!! ''No you can't swim ''I don't care im always with you ''No i'm coming down ''ok mommy'' '' Bye wait I didn't get your name'' oh sorry my name is Natalia" '' Well Bye Natalia'' Bye" I'm coming kat!'' "whats inside here oh wait it's a stable, hi unicorn!!" Natalia walks around back and sees Pringle land "PRINGLES YUMMY One pringle two pringles 50 Pringles oh wow but my adventure is over bye!!''
wow i love your work Natalia
ReplyDeleteGreat work Natalia - you used the prompt really well to get your imagination going. I like the idea of time stopping when you have an adventure especially with your friends!
ReplyDeleteI wonder if your character will have any other adventures.
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